I like this. Especially the emphasis on her issues of loss and betrayal and trust because yes.


I like where you've gone with the Boxed In thing - about the relationships she needs to work on more.

Admittedly, my view on the whole thing was a little different, based on my own experiences of last minute "Hey, let's do this!" "Oh, do you want to try (name)?" "Wasn't s/he going out on a date/ to watch the mud wrestling?" "Oh, yeah, right. Okay, how about-?"